出国留学申请书写作技巧以及范文

发布时间:2017-10-18 编辑:结珍

  留学申请书是招生老师了解申请者的一个绝佳途径。招生老师往往根据申请者自己写的留学申请书来了解申请者各个方面的能力和素质,包括英语语言能力、学历资格、学习潜力、以及个人兴趣和技能等等,而这些因素也很大程度上影响着申请者的入学资格,所以申请者务必要认真对待。下面就让我们和YJBYS一起来看一看出国留学申请书的写作。

  1、留学申请书写作技巧

  (1)不要一味套用写作模板

  不要一味套用规律的写作模板回答问题。因为这样很容易偏移原来大学文书的主题,而大学审查官也很容易察觉这种写作方式的千篇一律。

  (2)利用鲜活的实例

  学会利用鲜活的实例,让读者进入你的情境中,增加形象性和趣味性,让大学申请部的老师们可以感觉到申请人的想法。

  (3)写出自己的真情实感

  依照自己的性格写文书。在阅读无数的文书后,阅卷老师已能分辨什么是诚实与不诚实的作答,可以区分什么是发自内心回答,因而写作时应该让文书有趣,却又不可丧失自我,才能入老师的法眼。

  (4)突出个性

  对于入学体制不同于中国大学,更加注重学生的个性与特质,或者说更注重学生是否具有未来成功的潜力。所以,一篇把自己个人特色、优势表达得非常出色和到位的文书,就扮演了举足轻重的角色。总之,文书的创作一定要好好的挖掘自己身上的独特优势,这样才能展示出自己最有竞争力的一面。

  2、留学申请书英文范文

  Due to the comprehensiveness of China’s “reform and open” policies, economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. Though more and more companies built, management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. Management is a burgeoning field in China, so I hope I can acquire more modern knowledge on management in England. The roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. My father was among the first of China’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. As a young girl, it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures, and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. My mother was also involved in business as an accountant, helping him with simple calculations. And so it was early in my life that I hoped I, also, would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

  With the time of growing up, I preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. I never ceased to contemplate over the questions I encountered. Subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

  As a high school student in China, I had to concentrate on the College Entrance Examination (CEE), even so, books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. Unfortunately when sitting in the exam in June, 2001, I was so nervous that I didn’t score well in the CEE exam. I enrolled in the department of Computer Science in Zhejiang College of Traditional Chinese Medicine. Any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. After several terms, I realized that I would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. At that moment, I lost my direction and objectives.

  My persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. As a matter of fact, I enjoyed reading the books included Encyclopedia American, and some books about management by Peter F.Drucker. I began to notice something interesting: Why some companies can produce more than others? Why some company can sell more than others? Why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

  With the questions in my mind, I started to read many relevant books. I was lucky to read the book “Jack: Straight from the Gut”by Jack Welch, in Which John A. Byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. When I was a junior, I ran a bookshop by myself near my school. I should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. From this, my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed, definitely I was increasingly interested in what I was doing. By December, 2003, I had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of IT. To accumulate more relevant knowledge, I strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

  Fortunately, as a senior, I began by conducting an internship in the Architecture Company in Zhejiang Province. Over six months, I worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system, which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. The experience showed me that management is much more important than that of I thought in big companies. After graduation, I continued my work in this company. In May, 2005, the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. Through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes, they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas I mentioned.

  During the short period of training, I realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. Lancaster, with its excellence in management, represents the perfect fit for my needs. In your challenging environment, I can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. I am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. With this in mind, I hereby submit my application, and await your favorable reply.

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